Week
#2- Fragments, Run-ons, Word Choice, Capitalization
Concerned
about the fate of birds while the dragon was still lose. The Queen had all the birds in the Kingdom except
magpies locked up in cages she didn’t like magpies.
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Week
#3- Fragments & Capitalization
Renatta
Reynaldo rested on the bed for a moment.
Wishing she could change out of her beaded evening gown into jeans and a
sweatshirt and go for a spin on her Harley Davidson Motorcycle.
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Week
#4- Capitalization, Spelling, & Fragments
Leafs
fall in the Fall and leaf behind a blanket of red and orange covering the city
streets every november. Well, maybe not
in
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Week
#5- Quotation Marks & Capitalization
Mrs.
Tahini asked “what was wrong with me?”
when I came into class wearing only a giant garbage bag with a bike
chain belt around the middle and kleenex boxes as shoes.
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